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Lost in the flavor of a chemical dream
locust surround as dead flowers scream
tripping deep into beauty's third eye
she suspends me in her technicolor sky...

Like something never before seen
creatures roam with smiles upon this scene
touching nothing, I am truly free
making love to the moon, slut fucking the sea...

Heaven is sifting beneath my feet
such random thoughts play and repeat
to feel no happiness, to feel no pain
to feel nothing but this calm, gentle rain...

Forgetting all that they have said
as they salt the wounds of those they bled
a loud silence echoes in my head
empty spaces filled with those we’ve fed…

This moment I’m alive I will shed
to forget like past moments we have sped
the serenade plays on in my head
I close my eyes in warmth like I am dead.
©2004-2009 ~Bloodyroses
:iconbloodyroses:

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This was in my scraps..but I recieved good comments on it so I figured it was good enough to be in my :gallery: .....

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:iconpdxmisfit25:
I like that one alot. Sorry I don't have any advice to give.

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"If you're gonna scream, scream with me."
"Take my hand, You'll never find, another quite like me; And if you did, you'd see that i'm a lonely one. I lost my soul deep inside. And its so Black and Cold, deep inside.
:iconbloodyroses:
Thanks!!! :hug: i dont need advice, just a comment......

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~*~ ~*~ ~*~
Without free will,
There is no difference between,
Submission and Rebellion. - M.G.S 2
~*~ ~*~ ~*~
:iconjenienna:
I love it!! It's very powerful :clap:
:iconbloodyroses:
Thank you!!!! :hug:

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~*~ ~*~ ~*~
Without free will,
There is no difference between,
Submission and Rebellion. - M.G.S 2
~*~ ~*~ ~*~
:icongothfey:
Holy beJesus. This is really good. It makes me happy. You use big words! Yay for us! We both use big words.... Yeah, you know what I mean... :nod

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I'm more than my ten most recent deviations.
:iconbloodyroses:
I thought you'd like it.... I tried to sound intelligent........

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~*~ ~*~ ~*~
Without free will,
There is no difference between,
Submission and Rebellion. - M.G.S 2
~*~ ~*~ ~*~
:iconbloodyroses:
Are you still in school??? note me..I have too tell you something......

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~*~ ~*~ ~*~
Without free will,
There is no difference between,
Submission and Rebellion. - M.G.S 2
~*~ ~*~ ~*~

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